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Writing Clearly And Concisely TEXT

Applies Strunk's rules for clear, concise, and active prose to documentation, code comments, and user-facing text. Eliminates AI-generated fluff, passive voice, and unnecessary words to improve readability and professionalism.

4 uses this weeksource softaworkslicence MIT
Quality gate: PASS · better answers · measured 2026-10-24
Blind-judged against the bare model on 2 requests: average lift +7.0 points (specificity, structure, method, fit).
won 2/2, lift +7.0, tokens ×1491.38
Security scan: clean · 2026-10-24 · 8 files · ran in sandbox
no network calls, shell tricks, credential access or instruction tampering found in its files.

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Say it in your own words; the assistant finds this recipe by itself. Examples:

“Gør denne README mere præcis og fjern den passive stemme.”
“Kan du formulere denne fejlbesked mere direkte og mindre skræmmende?”
“Rediger mit commit-message, så det er kortere og følger konventionerne.”
“Rewrite this README section to be more concise and remove the passive voice.”
“Can you make this error message less intimidating and more direct for the user?”
“Edit this commit message so it follows standard conventions and is shorter.”
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Good for

writingeditingclarityconcisiondocumentationstyle-guideactive-voiceproofreadingtechnical-writingux-copy

Not for

Do not use this skill for creative fiction, poetry, or marketing copy where stylistic flair and emotional resonance are prioritized over strict clarity. It is not for code generation or debugging logic, though it can improve code comments. For legal contracts requiring specific boilerplate language, use a legal drafting skill instead.

Details

When it is the right choice

Use this skill when drafting or editing any text intended for human consumption, such as README files, error messages, commit messages, or technical reports. It is ideal for refining drafts that feel wordy, passive, or overly formal. Apply it to ensure the language is direct, specific, and free of generic AI-style filler.

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Writing Clearly and Concisely

Overview

Write with clarity and force. This skill covers what to do (Strunk) and what not to do (AI patterns).

When to Use This Skill

Use this skill whenever you write prose for humans:

  • Documentation, README files, technical explanations
  • Commit messages, pull request descriptions
  • Error messages, UI copy, help text, comments
  • Reports, summaries, or any explanation
  • Editing to improve clarity

If you're writing sentences for a human to read, use this skill.

Limited Context Strategy

When context is tight:

  1. Write your draft using judgment
  2. Dispatch a subagent with your draft and the relevant section file
  3. Have the subagent copyedit and return the revision

Loading a single section (~1,000-4,500 tokens) instead of everything saves significant context.

Elements of Style

William Strunk Jr.'s The Elements of Style (1918) teaches you to write clearly and cut ruthlessly.

Rules

Elementary Rules of Usage (Grammar/Punctuation):

  1. Form possessive singular by adding 's
  2. Use comma after each term in series except last
  3. Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas
  4. Comma before conjunction introducing co-ordinate clause
  5. Don't join independent clauses by comma
  6. Don't break sentences in two
  7. Participial phrase at beginning refers to grammatical subject

Elementary Principles of Composition:

  1. One paragraph per topic
  2. Begin paragraph with topic sentence
  3. Use active voice
  4. Put statements in positive form
  5. Use definite, specific, concrete language
  6. Omit needless words
  7. Avoid succession of loose sentences
  8. Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form
  9. Keep related words together
  10. Keep to one tense in summaries
  11. Place emphatic words at end of sentence

Reference Files

The rules above are summarized from Strunk's original text. For complete explanations with examples:

Section File ~Tokens
Grammar, punctuation, comma rules 02-elementary-rules-of-usage.md 2,500
Paragraph structure, active voice, concision 03-elementary-principles-of-composition.md 4,500
Headings, quotations, formatting 04-a-few-matters-of-form.md 1,000
Word choice, common errors 05-words-and-expressions-commonly-misused.md 4,000

Most tasks need only 03-elementary-principles-of-composition.md — it covers active voice, positive form, concrete language, and omitting needless words.

AI Writing Patterns to Avoid

LLMs regress to statistical means, producing generic, puffy prose. Avoid:

  • Puffery: pivotal, crucial, vital, testament, enduring legacy
  • Empty "-ing" phrases: ensuring reliability, showcasing features, highlighting capabilities
  • Promotional adjectives: groundbreaking, seamless, robust, cutting-edge
  • Overused AI vocabulary: delve, leverage, multifaceted, foster, realm, tapestry
  • Formatting overuse: excessive bullets, emoji decorations, bold on every other word

Be specific, not grandiose. Say what it actually does.

For comprehensive research on why these patterns occur, see signs-of-ai-writing.md. Wikipedia editors developed this guide to detect AI-generated submissions — their patterns are well-documented and field-tested.

Bottom Line

Writing for humans? Load the relevant section from elements-of-style/ and apply the rules. For most tasks, 03-elementary-principles-of-composition.md covers what matters most.

Files in this skill (9)
  • LICENSE
  • README.md
  • SKILL.md
  • elements-of-style/01-introductory.md
  • elements-of-style/02-elementary-rules-of-usage.md
  • elements-of-style/03-elementary-principles-of-composition.md
  • elements-of-style/04-a-few-matters-of-form.md
  • elements-of-style/05-words-and-expressions-commonly-misused.md
  • signs-of-ai-writing.md
Where it comes from

Vendored from softaworks/agent-toolkit, commit 3027f20f3181, path skills/writing-clearly-and-concisely, licence MIT. The upstream licence file ships inside the skill.